Hey zach here
Sorry man but I saw my name there and couldn't resist checking your subs. Didn't like them. And I mean they have realy big mistakes.
And also at some points you left my subs and put your's too resulting in a screen full of subs. Too much stuff for the vewer to read. Subs should be as compact as possible.
Striking difference: you hear "M" in the first scene saying "Get after them" and you have to know that in "British English" this sounds like "Get off to them", but they actualy say "Get AFTER them". So you shouldn't have changed that or any other part, except for the better. I've read the first 40 minutes and I saw many similar mistaces.
Good effort but they need revision. Untill then, I wouldn't suggest downloading to anyone.
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